Drawing it out !
Paper 1: Scene 1: An opening viewing of the sky and trees in the park Scene 2: This will be a viewing of what happened in character 1's past life with his dad Scene 3: Character one walks to the park to sit and reflect Scene 4: Character 1's goes and sits on a bench and character 2 sees and approaches him Scene 5: They talk and introduce themselves and character 2 invites character 1 to church Scene 6: They start to walk to church and they talk on there way there about character 2's hard life Papaer 2: Scene 1: Character 1 and character 2 arrive at the church while service is going on and they sit down Scene 2: The pastor is standing and he stats to preach and calls character 1 to give a praise dance Scene 3: Character 1 begins to minister in dance to the congregation Scene 4: As character 1 continues in dance, while character 2 starts to feel it and begins to cry Scene 5: Character 1 continues to dance, and the pastor goes over and starts to pray for character 2...